पहिली कथा बोअरींग पण दूसरी मात्र खूपच छान.

Both of the stories are indeed good ones and different too. Elaborated description, creative story base and a thought provoking message in the end that’s how I will describe them. Keep writing!

First one boring.Second one ok.

Khup simple aani chan goshta

अतिशय उत्कृष्ट कथावाचक स्वर भावपूर्णसुयोग्य संगीताची साथयामुळे श्रवणीय

वाचन सुंदर. कथा सुंदर.फक्त रहस्य कथा ही category चुकीची

Boring and senseless stories. Wrong category- thriller